Story Revisions

Blue Denim:

• The first part of Scene 4 is posted twice
  How could Ernie have told Lillian if Ernie had after school detention?
  Since I’m erasing the Ernie part I might as well revise Arthur’s last line in Scene 4.
  I never changed the original story, so basically change 37 years to 42. Initially it took place in 1963, however, I moved it back to 1958.
  “when did IT hit you”
  MAGGARDY NOT HAGGARDY(Ernie Scene 6)
  You not we(Arthur Scene 6)